Persuasive Writing

Topic no school uniform


Hi my name is Summer

Did you know that school uniforms restrict students' freedom of expression? Hi, my name is Summer and I am trying to persuade you to remove school uniforms in school.



I think we should remove school uniforms because it will be easy in the morning to find clothes. It will also make the students more relaxed, in their own clothes that they would normally wear at home ,and parents should not need to pay just so their child can go to school uniforms don't stop bullying and may increase violent attacks.



These reasons will help us feel more relaxed in class can you please think about losing school uniform, thank you for listening and I hope you have a great day.

school

stuff that I hate and like at school

stuff that I hate

having to do the work because that there are heaps of writtig that you need to do.

stuff that I like

choice because you can have a lot of fun.

 

stuff at school

                           In school we are doing speech's and my speech is all about cheaters.

                                                                       By Summer   

Hi m

27/9/18

name is Summer and I am going to show, you about what we have been doing in our

classroom we have been reading nonfiction and fiction books, and been making activities from the book’s that we read, here is my favourite activity.

I am proud of the castle that I did. My castle is from Sleeping Beauty.

Daffodil day

shatytown

At Shantytown we were looking for a man who was stealing gold coins from Shantytown and blankets and sheets and a pillowcase from the hospital. We found some handprints on the window and the handprints were not small they were big. There were card’s that said evidence and the word evidence was on little yellow pieces of paper and we tried to get a handprint and the man he had very big hand’s and he is tall. So why did he put the handprint down on the window? It is so so weird that he is tall and he put his handprints down on the window looking at a loaf of bread. Why did he not pay the shop that he went to and in the shop there was pictures and he said, he had to duck down going out of the door so we measured the size of the door to see how tall he was. It was so fun at Shantytown I liked going on the train it was my favorite thing that we did at Shantytown.